"Who do you Hail"

So what you tried, you fail
who did you hail
so what, you need love, you ide
now who's going to try
you gave up

You are close to the light
your mind will go astray
and to your heart delight
too innocent to pay

tored down covered in dirt
was not treated so kind
and the people you hurt
fill darkness in your mind

People love you that's no lie
hold you,kiss you, f*ck you
please don't you dare deny
because we all hurt too

So what, you tried, you fail
who did you hail
so what, you need my love too
I'm going to you

And who did you hail
your are down on one knee
one can't ever fail
but now you can not see

people love you that's no lie
hold you, kiss you, f*ck you
please don't you dare deny
cause I know I love you
don't give up

"Surrender"

YOu told me to hate
now i hate myself too
you never were hearing
the dark never clearing
making my life just suck
you stupid little f*ck

You wanted it your way
I surrender each day
whishing one day you die
you are living a lie
getting off your damn load
while you walk through hell's road

Curse this blood
its just a dud
run away
have it your way
go along
and write the wrong
while you walk through hell's road

the evil you possess
making my life a mess
want to hurt and too kill
but the heaven's are ill
depressed i can not slay
but avengement one day

"In Me"
-First as a side note, this is personally about myself. It is myself wanting to start a fresh life and leave
everything else behind. The emotion is to love when i was never loved. I want to give someone something that
I know I would like, but I give love because more caring and love out there, the most important thing
happened, i started to love myself.

You risk you health
to earn your wealth
my pain is loud
so you'll be proud
of nothing

so when do i stop the slide
to regain some of my pride

hate is my lust
nothing i trust
just one more heave
so i believe
iiiiinnnnn mmmmmeeeeee (sorry had to do that)

If i need hate
i'll die in fate
you hold me tight
all through the night
I know
and I know
I know
it's looooovvvvvvee (again sorry:eek

So when do I stop the slide
to regain some of my pride
you need to be strong be strong
because I won't live to wrong
I know
and I know
your know
it's love

That is it for now. Please give comments and feelings, don't think that what I believe about a poem is right, we all feel differently about them. Thanks for reading. For people whom already read "Who do you hail?", yes it is a "remix". I thought that it was for the better.

"Who do you Hail"

So what you tried, you fail
who did you hail
so what, you need love, you ide
now who's going to try
you gave up

You are close to the light
your mind will go astray
and to your heart delight
too innocent to pay

tored down covered in dirt
was not treated so kind
and the people you hurt
fill darkness in your mind

People love you that's no lie
hold you,kiss you, f*ck you
please don't you dare deny
because we all hurt too

So what, you tried, you fail
who did you hail
so what, you need my love too
I'm going to you

And who did you hail
your are down on one knee
one can't ever fail
but now you can not see

people love you that's no lie
hold you, kiss you, f*ck you
please don't you dare deny
cause I know I love you
don't give up

"Surrender"

YOu told me to hate
now i hate myself too
you never were hearing
the dark never clearing
making my life just suck
you stupid little f*ck

You wanted it your way
I surrender each day
whishing one day you die
you are living a lie
getting off your damn load
while you walk through hell's road

Curse this blood
its just a dud
run away
have it your way
go along
and write the wrong
while you walk through hell's road

the evil you possess
making my life a mess
want to hurt and too kill
but the heaven's are ill
depressed i can not slay
but avengement one day

"In Me"
-First as a side note, this is personally about myself. It is myself wanting to start a fresh life and leave
everything else behind. The emotion is to love when i was never loved. I want to give someone something that
I know I would like, but I give love because more caring and love out there, the most important thing
happened, i started to love myself.

You risk you health
to earn your wealth
my pain is loud
so you'll be proud
of nothing

so when do i stop the slide
to regain some of my pride

hate is my lust
nothing i trust
just one more heave
so i believe
iiiiinnnnn mmmmmeeeeee (sorry had to do that)

If i need hate
i'll die in fate
you hold me tight
all through the night
I know
and I know
I know
it's looooovvvvvvee (again sorry:eek

So when do I stop the slide
to regain some of my pride
you need to be strong be strong
because I won't live to wrong
I know
and I know
your know
it's love

That is it for now. Please give comments and feelings, don't think that what I believe about a poem is right, we all feel differently about them. Thanks for reading. For people whom already read "Who do you hail?", yes it is a "remix". I thought that it was for the better.